Flowing liquid
Narrow channels
I can feel the harsh wind
But I have to walk through
Every boundary seems foggy
As I strive to break out of this stupor
Mind full of anxieties
Too many demons to pummel
But the only one I can see is me
No place secure enough to break into
I pray hard for the curse to be broken
The rock I was holding on to was just a loose gravel
This ‘Golden Shovel’ Poem was written in response to David’s W3 prompt for this week. I have used the following lines as the last words for my poem :
Liquid channels wind through foggy stupor Anxieties pummel me into broken gravel



*sigh* this is simultaneously relatable to me and sad… so beautifully written!
❤
David
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Thanks David 💕
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So poignant! That last line really leaves an impact!
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Thank you!
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Well written, Aditi!
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Thanks!!
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Hi, Aditi ❤
I just want to let you know that this week's W3 is now live, and it'll be open until Sunday morning, 10:00 AM (GMT+3).
I hope you can join us this week 🙂
~David
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Hi, Aditi ❤
I just wanna let you know that the W3 prompt for this week (hosted by the lovely Britta Benson) is now live:
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Definitely relatable. Well-penned. 🙏
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